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Hi friends. Something different this week. I’ve been working on a chapbook manuscript for…well, years. And in the last few weeks, I’ve gotten closer to drafts that I didn’t want to pitch into a lake, so I thought I’d share two of them. Feel free to comment! It would be nice to get some thoughts, to be honest, given that I’ve been working on them largely in secret like a total weirdo for years. As always, the voiceover is me reading them.
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House Fire The dogs died first. We watched from the hill— their bodies on the lawn— bitter little things. Every thought a torch now— cracked and charred. And the fireman said, They suffocate before they burn.
Forgetting For Jareka and Daniel I. It starts with words— mason jars that we fill with the small bones of all the little dead things we find on our long walks through the woods. When the jars are full we put them on the shelf above the bed— take them down late at night to hurl at each other or clutch to our chests. Where does language live in you? he said. And breath was a stone— that sat in my throat. II. Under pressure, Richard tells us the joke: What do they do with Blacks after they die? We wait for the hurt. Gut them and make wetsuits. At another party I ask him to tell it again. III. There’s a scene in the movie where everyone inhales at once and then gnashes their teeth. It marks the separation of acts one and two. Audience participation is required. IV. I remember now —how a heart can rot in a chest.
“And breath
was a stone—
that sat in my throat.”
I liked all of it, but especially that part.💜